I have an idea for a commerical but having trouble executing it.

My idea is we see this person doing something with their PB then pickup their BB and go thru their Today screen checking of facebook,tweeter,email,txt and missed call noticfactions and their calander for the day. I think the Today screen is a function of the BlackBerry that really sets it apart from the other smartphones. Its so useful.
I just can't get the right angle an it turns more into a review than a commerical to me. That the on thing that bothers me about Rims commericals is that they talk a lot but don't say anything. I want to show the Blackberry in action. Anybody have any ideas?