I am a journalist looking for readership (IE Page Views) hope you don't mind but I write about live music. It's really good stuff, take a moment and check out my articles (be sure to click on each one):
Decent reviews, nice writing. My head kinda exploded tho when I read "The piano instantly took the listener in and moved with the grove of the bass." I've never known the bass to be a grove instrument, always thinking instead that it was more of a herd instrument.
I'll add a link for those who don't feel up to decoding yours...
lol thanks. I'm not a perfect writer yet still working on my craft here. Crackberry wouldn't let me post up a link yet.. :P so thanks again I really appreciate it! Trying to get all of the errors out of my writing